The Tranquilizer

#first_haiku_attempt

They gather guts taking bottles down,evaniscing all the grumbles all the frowns.

The heart spits what’s in it Maybe that’s why they call it ‘spirit’.

–ANUGRAH MISHRA

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(Please like and comment,I would love to hear suggestions from your side, since it’s my first haiku attempt..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€)

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2 thoughts on “The Tranquilizer

  1. not sure it’s haiku but it’s terse and thought provoking. You could have a look at 575three.wordpress.com for my interpretation of the haiku style.

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